You did a decent job of maintaining an awareness of your audience. But, I don't think the purpose is quite as clear. I didn't really find the initial thesis statement. The purpose of this essay was to give examples.
We can't see your paper when you look on your blog...
You did a decent job of maintaining an awareness of your audience. But, I don't think the purpose is quite as clear. I didn't really find the initial thesis statement. The purpose of this essay was to give examples.
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